CRIT GOES HERE
Jul. 3rd, 2017 11:24 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
cattymageAnything to say about my roleplaying? Please do!
Potential topics include:
- is the dialog even close to believable
- too much / too little thought process shown?
- too much / too little action at a time?
- not sad enough
- not enough cat
- something i've messed up re: timelines?
- too much purple prosery?
- too much fucking around with html? (bad old habit)
- not enough intense flashes of seething, underlying bitterness beneath the thin veneer of defensive humor?
- no but i really do hope i'm doing alright with this feathery ball of gravitas-to-be, any tips would be cool
Potential topics include:
- is the dialog even close to believable
- too much / too little thought process shown?
- too much / too little action at a time?
- not sad enough
- not enough cat
- something i've messed up re: timelines?
- too much purple prosery?
- too much fucking around with html? (bad old habit)
- not enough intense flashes of seething, underlying bitterness beneath the thin veneer of defensive humor?
- no but i really do hope i'm doing alright with this feathery ball of gravitas-to-be, any tips would be cool
